Creating a mock up

When creating a mock up for the magazine i need to consider the mise en scene, so the setting, lights, costume, props and make-up. From looking at photos and other magazine advertisements in my research, i decided to take factors of their adverts so i know they will be effective with the audience. It needs to be eye catching, with just the right information and images. If you put too much information on your advertisement, the audience will loose interest so you just need the basics. - Name of artist, title name of CD, "Out Now" and the date its released.
There are two mock ups on my Media A2 blog, one with the basic layout and the second one with the actual writing positioned on it.